Not that good
Bad font, bad audio, and seems like it's the demo for something rather unoriginal.
Not that good
Bad font, bad audio, and seems like it's the demo for something rather unoriginal.
Needs A Little Editing
Not a new or original idea, but fairly well executed. I, personally, don't really like the music choice, and the background colors all gave me a headache.
The main thing you need to fix is the fact that you're switching between clips after the clip is already completed, so the transition looks really jerky since the image stops. That's just a matter of editing, though.
Keep it up.
Could Use Some Work
Since you want reviews on the humor, I'll just say that I didn't find anything funny about it. Perhaps it demands a certain sense of humor to see it, but it just didn't appeal to me.
Addionally, I think the play button was an unnecessary annoyance. I can understand not wanting people to miss any of the dialogue, but it could be handled in a better way than stopping and restarting the animation after every speech bubble.
Nice Job
I like the style but wish a little more effort had been put into the graphics at points. Keep it up.
Love It
I like the story and I really enjoy the way you executed it. I do wish there had been more actual animation, because the clips you did animate I really liked.
Art Student
Joined on 5/27/07