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[Beauty of Valentines Day]

It's a Storyboard

Well I probably wouldn't have watched it if I'd known it was just a storyboard, seeing as how that's not what I come here for, but I suppose you succeeded at telling a story. Since it's not news that quality animation cannot be done in thirty minutes, you should have allotted yourself more time.

Athi responds:

I didn't know if I was going to be able to get back on the computer this week, so I just had to make sure I had "something" in those 30 minutes :P

[line and line again]

He Was Right

You shouldn't have submitted it.

mddgdog responds:

ya, i know but i wanted to what people whould say about this junk

[Someday Trailer]

Review

Wow; someone in one of my classes is doing a project with a very similar story. Then again, I don't think this is the most original plot. The look is nice, especially the layouts, but I don't like the tweening so much. Gives it that cheap flash look that you're obviously very capable of transcending. Looks like it will be a nice project when you finally get to it.

Kalapusa responds:

I don't reveal anything from the story here. Just the fact that he has to pee.

[Odd Walk Cycle]

Study life and motion

Well it's not Flash, but that's not really the issue. Nobody could walk like that without falling over. If someone were leaning back that far their feet would have to stay beneath them to help balance and suppose the weight. Study how the body moves and how weight affects that movement. Since you did this for an animation class, I assume you're at some school where you should have access to life drawing resources. Use them. "Odd" just looks bad if it's physically impossible for no apparent reason.

yelowcow responds:

thanks for the lesson in physics and the human body. No body said this was realistic. It was an assignment for school to make a walk cycle, and i felt like doing some thing a bit weird rather than the exact same thing as every one else.

[Birdzone Movie Teaser]

Awesome!

Very nice! Definitely looking forward to the completed version!

rbecus responds:

me too ... there simply isn`t enough time for everything in this lifetime :)

[-AE- Xion]

?

What the heck was this supposed to be? Why does the barely bouncing red ball squish upon the only click you can make on it?

ianianian1111 responds:

because that makes him shoot the sherrif with his shotgun, thus, saving the queen from king henry the fourth. god ur an idiot!

[SwitchBlade FBF Collab]

Pretty Nice Job

It's random...but I like the animation in parts.

itsjms responds:

Thanks alot.

[NinjaBlock3; The Core]

Alright

Using blocks instead of sticks makes it a little more interesting. The effects animation (in that one explosion) is decent. The slow-moving dialogue that reveals what is going on really drags and kinda kills it, esepcially since the animation ends like two seconds later. I haven't watched all of your NinjaBlock submissions, but perhaps it would be better (if it's one continuous story), for them to all be put together.

Holydrainer responds:

Yup. They're all short i know. But atleast they got in every movie something else so i think i did abit too much on the not-the-same thingy.

[S1E02-Tree Terror]

Needs More Effort

Ever heard of the twelve principles of animation? If not, look them up, learn them, and practice them because this claymation lacks all of them. There is no timing, the story beats make no sense, the editing makes no sense, the music seems pointless, and the voices are hard to understand.

mattuiop responds:

it was very old!

i will send out better ones!

[Eyeballoon]

Pretty Nice

The animation is well done and it has a very classic feel to it. The style doesn't appeal to me, personally, but it does work for this. Keep it up.

boinky33 responds:

Thank you for the review.