NionKokesu's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love comes and go]

Good Job

You obviously put a lot of work into this, but it's almost just a developed animatic. You need more inbetweens to smooth things out a bit. Good storytelling, though. Nice work.

[-Sugar sugar-]

Great Job

Awesome job! Great timing, very cool concept.
Love it!

[Nickelbackdo this anymore]

Needs Work

Hoping the very incomplete feeling is just due to the fact that it IS incomplete. The only part that I actually like is the little pink thing. Everything looks very rough, try cleaning it up a bit.

[Its an Object Life.]

Nice

I think this is good. Follows one of the prime rules in animation-KISS. The story is simple, the style is simple, it all works. The one thing that doesn't work for me is the fire. Looks like a giant electic shock rather than fire.

[-AE- Xion]

?

What the heck was this supposed to be? Why does the barely bouncing red ball squish upon the only click you can make on it?

ianianian1111 responds:

because that makes him shoot the sherrif with his shotgun, thus, saving the queen from king henry the fourth. god ur an idiot!

[SwitchBlade FBF Collab]

Pretty Nice Job

It's random...but I like the animation in parts.

itsjms responds:

Thanks alot.

[Signs alive]

Neat

It doesn't really seem to be about living signs so much as normal non-living signs displaying animated (living) worlds. And it kinda drags on after a while. Nicely done, though.

[NinjaBlock3; The Core]

Alright

Using blocks instead of sticks makes it a little more interesting. The effects animation (in that one explosion) is decent. The slow-moving dialogue that reveals what is going on really drags and kinda kills it, esepcially since the animation ends like two seconds later. I haven't watched all of your NinjaBlock submissions, but perhaps it would be better (if it's one continuous story), for them to all be put together.

Holydrainer responds:

Yup. They're all short i know. But atleast they got in every movie something else so i think i did abit too much on the not-the-same thingy.

[S1E02-Tree Terror]

Needs More Effort

Ever heard of the twelve principles of animation? If not, look them up, learn them, and practice them because this claymation lacks all of them. There is no timing, the story beats make no sense, the editing makes no sense, the music seems pointless, and the voices are hard to understand.

mattuiop responds:

it was very old!

i will send out better ones!

[Eyeballoon]

Pretty Nice

The animation is well done and it has a very classic feel to it. The style doesn't appeal to me, personally, but it does work for this. Keep it up.

boinky33 responds:

Thank you for the review.