Score: 6

"Alright"

submission: NinjaBlock3; The Core

date: June 3, 2007

Using blocks instead of sticks makes it a little more interesting. The effects animation (in that one explosion) is decent. The slow-moving dialogue that reveals what is going on really drags and kinda kills it, esepcially since the animation ends like two seconds later. I haven't watched all of your NinjaBlock submissions, but perhaps it would be better (if it's one continuous story), for them to all be put together.

Score: 0

"Needs More Effort"

submission: S1E02-Tree Terror

date: June 1, 2007

Ever heard of the twelve principles of animation? If not, look them up, learn them, and practice them because this claymation lacks all of them. There is no timing, the story beats make no sense, the editing makes no sense, the music seems pointless, and the voices are hard to understand.

Score: 6

"Pretty Nice"

submission: Eyeballoon

date: June 1, 2007

The animation is well done and it has a very classic feel to it. The style doesn't appeal to me, personally, but it does work for this. Keep it up.

Score: 1

"Not that good"

submission: Global Rage Demo

date: May 31, 2007

Bad font, bad audio, and seems like it's the demo for something rather unoriginal.

Score: 5

"Needs A Little Editing"

submission: iSkateboard*

date: May 31, 2007

Not a new or original idea, but fairly well executed. I, personally, don't really like the music choice, and the background colors all gave me a headache.

The main thing you need to fix is the fact that you're switching between clips after the clip is already completed, so the transition looks really jerky since the image stops. That's just a matter of editing, though.

Keep it up.

Score: 0

"Could Use Some Work"

submission: a celebration

date: May 28, 2007

Since you want reviews on the humor, I'll just say that I didn't find anything funny about it. Perhaps it demands a certain sense of humor to see it, but it just didn't appeal to me.

Addionally, I think the play button was an unnecessary annoyance. I can understand not wanting people to miss any of the dialogue, but it could be handled in a better way than stopping and restarting the animation after every speech bubble.

Score: 8

"Nice Job"

submission: FBF - Crazy

date: May 28, 2007

I like the style but wish a little more effort had been put into the graphics at points. Keep it up.

Score: 8

"Love It"

submission: Do Us Part

date: May 28, 2007

I like the story and I really enjoy the way you executed it. I do wish there had been more actual animation, because the clips you did animate I really liked.

Score: 1

"I Don't Get the Title"

submission: [KK] Battlecry

date: May 27, 2007

Neurologically damaging loops that are painfully hypnotizing for about...15 seconds. Well...the music was alright, at least.